I feel defeated and so lost
Like I am being tumbled
Give me a chance
that’s all I ask
So I can
what I need
I like the “chance” and “advance” rhyme. Well done.
Thanks so much
It reminded me of a garden salad when I read “tumbled and tossed”. I hate it when people overdress my salad, not that I am much of a salad eater, but nothing worse than a salad drowning in dressing. Not sure how you rectify that.
God I do too! Well next time we will order it on the side!
love the rythmic pattern; the way the words rhyme with each other. thanks for sharing.
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