Rippling Thoughts

Rippling Thoughts

Waves that move in
circles
of distant thought

Envelopes my mind
Making it distraught

If we toss a pebble inside
the brain

We hope as it ripples
we will sustain

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About kwicksand

Sinking in the quicksand of my thoughts. ~David Bowie
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13 Responses to Rippling Thoughts

  1. Mike says:

    A great imagining of the sublime. Very well done.

  2. jerri42 says:

    Really enjoyed this.

  3. katriter says:

    You are on a roll here with some great stuff

  4. Michael says:

    Feel free to submit to inparenthesesmag.com. If you’d like to, email us at inparenthesesx@gmail.com. Good stuff here!

  5. Ben Naga has something on Ripples today.

  6. Cubby says:

    The pebbles in your brain make large ripples that reach out and cause ripples of their own. Fantastic piece.

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